I’ve heard Coach B say in a video that the hip drive for the clean (more up/down or dip/drive) is different than the hip drive for the kettlebell swing (more back/front or violent closing of the hips). So from that standpoint, I question the validity of making a direct correlative between KB swing form and Clean form.
That aside, here are some things I noticed on your KB swing. Bear in mind I am not a coach, and these are just my personal observations. A good coach could give you cues to fix these things.